Talk:The American Crisis
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[edit] Still needs work
The American Crisis article still needs a bit of work--McNoddy 09:13, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
- Some suggestions:
1) The second quote is already a part of the first quote and should therefore be deleted.
2) The first quote is already, in longer form, in the article for Thomas Paine, which has an additional quote that is not in this article. Perhaps a merge should be made with that article, or perhaps those quotes should be transferred here. It depends on how much larger you intend to make this page.
3) Since one of the quotes here (from Crisis II) is simply quoting Cardinal Wolsey, as Paine himself acknowledges, there is no point in keeping it. This would leave only one quote from the current article. . - InvisibleSun 09:38, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
- Sounds like you've done some reseach on it am quite happy with your ideas and maybe it should emerged or something.--McNoddy 10:14, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
