Talk:Rachel Whiteread

Issues I currently see: wikipedia box at the top, not in an external links section. Quotes have embedded comments (comments should go in a sub-bullet, below the source information). Less critical issues are the long introduction (introductions are usually 2-3 sentences), and too little information in the source (usually I prefer to add the title the newspaper gave to the interview, as well as the interviewer's name). ~ MosheZadka (Talk) 06:30, 17 October 2005 (UTC)

I did most of the recommended cleanup. I didn't feel competent to shorten the intro, and I didn't notice an author in the second cited article. (I forgot to check the first, but I admit I don't usually include the author of a newspaper article when I have the link.) ~ Jeff Q (talk) 06:41, 17 October 2005 (UTC)

Thanks! I managed to find the authors' names: the first one was cleverly hiding in the intro to the article, the second one I could only get by asking for the "printable version". ~ MosheZadka (Talk) 07:03, 17 October 2005 (UTC)