Talk:Spider-Man: Web of Shadows

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Formatting something[edit]

I think this needs to be reformatted:

Venom: What are these pretty little things?
Spider-Man (Red Suit): You are in way over your multiple heads! You and this ship are going down!
Spider-Man (Black Suit): This ends here and now, Venom! I'm destroying this ship, and you along with it!
Venom: I think not. We cannot be stopped. We shall use this vessel to take this world.
Spider-Man (Red Suit): What about the innnocent, Eddie? This is against everything you believe!
Spider-Man (Black Suit): That's not like you, Brock. You swore you'd protect the innocent.
Venom: Eddie Brock is such a small part of what we are. But you? Your power will complete us.
Spider-Man (Red Suit): Over my dead body.
Spider-Man (Black Suit): You'll have to kill me first!
Venom: As you wish.

his is not exactly 'correct' in that each line is supposed to read as a separate character but we have two lines for Spider-Man.

I see three options: One, separate sections for the red and black suit paths (but you'll be repeating Venom's dialogue.

Option two might look like:

Venom: What are these pretty little things?
Spider-Man:
  • [Red Suit] You are in way over your multiple heads! You and this ship are going down!
  • [Black Suit] This ends here and now, Venom! I'm destroying this ship, and you along with it!
Venom: I think not. We cannot be stopped. We shall use this vessel to take this world.
Spider-Man:
  • [Red Suit] What about the innnocent, Eddie? This is against everything you believe!
  • [Black Suit] That's not like you, Brock. You swore you'd protect the innocent.
Venom: Eddie Brock is such a small part of what we are. But you? Your power will complete us.
Spider-Man:
  • [Red Suit] Over my dead body.
  • [Black Suit] You'll have to kill me first!
Venom: As you wish.

And option 3 might look like:

Venom: What are these pretty little things?
Spider-Man: [Red Suit] You are in way over your multiple heads! You and this ship are going down! / [Black Suit] This ends here and now, Venom! I'm destroying this ship, and you along with it!
Venom: I think not. We cannot be stopped. We shall use this vessel to take this world.
Spider-Man [Red Suit] What about the innnocent, Eddie? This is against everything you believe! / [Black Suit] That's not like you, Brock. You swore you'd protect the innocent.
Venom: Eddie Brock is such a small part of what we are. But you? Your power will complete us.
Spider-Man [Red Suit] Over my dead body. / [Black Suit] You'll have to kill me first!
Venom: As you wish.

Personally, I think Option 2 is the cleanest. Side note, all the linking needs to go in that article too. One is enough. Giftheck (talk) 08:33, 14 July 2022 (UTC)Reply[reply]

@Giftheck: Agreed per Manual of style. – Ilovemydoodle (Not a sockpuppet) (talk / e-mail) 08:39, 14 July 2022 (UTC)Reply[reply]